Thursday, 17 October 2013

Performance Analysis

We began our performance of Punk Rock by Simon Stephens at 6pm on 16th October 2013. Punk Rock was written and published in 2009. In the library of a grammar school in Manchester, seven sixth-formers (Tanya Gleason, Nicholas Chatman, Lilly Cahill, Cissy Franks, Chadwick Meade, Bennett Francis and William Carlisle) are preparing for their mock A Levels and nearing the end of their school lives. Punk Rock explores various sub-plots detailing the lives of a teenager in the modern society. Including: Broken homes, self harm, lying, smoking, sex, love triangles, new people, friendship groups, education and a school massacre.

As an actor/actress it was vital for us to carry out our roles naturally and to understand the truth behind each character and to deliver our lines as if they were all different and had a separate meaning. For the past eight weeks have worked on our characters thoughts, feelings, wants, background, how they look, how they act around certain characters and stage appearances including how they dress and come across to others including the audience. Our assignment was to deliver the truth and reality behind a school massacre and show each characters through the perspective of how we have interpreted them and incorporate what we have learned in the past eight weeks about our characters and the characters around us. Although we all had separate scenes and most people shared their roles in the different scenes we all worked together to produce an outstanding performance.

Special effects were carried out throughout the entire play. The audiences chairs were set up on the left and right hand sides of the room in a straight line and the main performance to place in the centre of the room, the effect of this was to have a more abstract feel on the play and to also view it in different areas to keep the audiences attention alert. The lights were set in the middle of the room where the main scene was however the entire room was still visible and each character sustained their role despite being in the spot light or not. Also significant music was played at the beginning and end of the performance, the music used was The White Stripes instrumentals played because this seemed to be a type of music that was enjoyed by most of the characters in the play and at one point was also spoken about by Lilly and Nicholas. It was also a top selling track in 2009 where this play was also published.

The Punk Rock music began to play (The white stripes) and each group walked through the left and right side doors acting in their character and walking with their group to their side of the room. We began to 'feel the music' by leg tapping and then beginning to dance. My character was Lilly Cahill, she was the new girl who had been moved around from school to school at her parents demand. In my scene Lilly was quite shy as it was her first day, however not completely shy as she was used to change despite how much she hated it. Therefore according to my characters thoughts and feelings when I danced, I depended on another character who I felt closer with and understood me. Suddenly, Doctor Harvey walked in and the music stopped and everybody became stagnant. Until a sudden outburst of scream took place and everybody was immediately in the scene of a shooting. Everybody had acted and believed they were in this scene amazingly as the scream and the movements all happened at the same time and worked together extremely well.

As each scene took place bouncing from either side of the room, the excess characters who were not playing were on their sides of the room acting as general school kids. If the excess characters were not looking at the scenes I believe this would have made the performance look even more realistic. Although the characters acted as if they were doing other things whilst the scenes were taking place it would have been more effective if all of them were doing different activities and all not watching the scenes.  Excess characters however were doing minor activities such as people reading, someone on a laptop studying, some on their phone, some eating and others just standing around. This was effective because although the spotlight was on one particular scene if the audience had ever lost focus or just glanced across the room they'd notice that they were still in a school atmosphere by looking at the other students.


The stage layout to our scene



My scene went extremely well. All characters played their roles correctly and the difference in each characters thoughts and feelings was shown outstandingly. Everybody remembered their lines and stage actions however also let some come naturally as we knew our characters by this point inside out. Everybody in the entire performance including my group spoke clearly and loudly, this also didn't destroy how our characters actually spoke their lines. Each line had a different feeling... Either it came from our heart, gut, feet, head or groin. It was vital that we all worked together well because if not then the scenes would not have run in unison with one another and also it would have been harder in the process of making the performance if we couldn't use teamwork effectively. This fortunately, was not a problem for our team.

Actions and gestures were used throughout the entire play. In the weeks heading up to the performance we never spoke about using actions and gestures as we believed it should come naturally to the character we already knew a lot about. The actions mirrored the plays meaning, for example when Nicholas kisses Lilly, the audience instantly knew that there was a closer relationship between them and this opened new doors as we saw that there was now a love triangle between Lilly, Nicholas and William.

The use of a school uniform really made the entire performance seem realistic. We all wore skirts/trousers and white school shirts with green ties. Some characters, however, had their own adjustments for example, Lilly in the first scene had a faux coat as William speaks about it in this scene. Also William in the first scene (the mental institute) doesn't wear a uniform and instead wears a tracksuit. Dr Harvey wears a formal dress and small heels (also in the mental institute). The effect of using costumes was to show the audience who the characters really were and how they were addressed by different characters, also, how they should be interpreted by the audience viewing the performance.

Uniform of Lilly Cahill and Cissy Franks
Using props made the scenes seem realistic and natural. People had to use props to explain what they were doing and how they were doing it. For example, in one scene Lilly showed William that she self harmed and in this case had to use a lighter which she needed to act as if she burnt herself.

Cuts were made during the script because they were not that important and didn't have much significance in what we really wanted to show. However, this I would of thought could have made it more confusing for the audience to catch onto the plot and meaning we were trying to mirror.

Our scene before it was annotated
Overall the audience seemed pleased with what we were capable of producing in eight weeks. They also seemed out standed by the level of focus we contriubuted to the entire play. There were only a few minor critiques made, however overall for a first performance produced in eight weeks including sessions on getting to know our characters and others around us we all did amazingly. It was a delight to work alongside many talented peers and I look forward to more in the future.







Class photo before the play

Sunday, 22 September 2013

Research links around different themes

As Cambridge gets new primary in East Chesterton, boss warns against 'corporate school in a box' approach

http://www.cambridge-news.co.uk/Cambridge/Cambridge-gets-a-new-primary-school-in-East-Chesterton-20130921054211.htm

Teenage pregnancy rates to keep falling in Telford


Study investigating divorce impact on Okla. children, taxpayers

http://kfor.com/2013/09/09/study-investigating-divorce-impact-on-okla-children-taxpayers/

Jack Johnson Performs “I Got You” + Covers The White Stripes For Album Release
http://www.vh1.com/music/tuner/2013-09-17/jack-johnson-live-performances/


Columbine High School massacre
The Columbine High School massacre was a school shooting which occurred on April 20, 1999, at Columbine High School in Columbine. It was a highly planned attack involved a fire bomb to divert fire fighters, propane tanks converted to bombs placed in the cafeteria, 99 explosive devices, and bombs rigged in cars. Two senior students, Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold, murdered a total of 12 students and one teacher. They injured 24 additional students, with three other people being injured while attempting to escape the school. The pair then committed suicide. The Columbine High School massacre is the deadliest mass murder committed on an American high school campus, and is noted as one of the first and most serious of a series of high profile spree shootings which have since occurred.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zp-BeywDvLI

Meaningful quotations to Lilly Cahill

"Look at everything as though you were seeing it either for the first or last time. Then your time on earth will be filled with glory." Betty Smith 

"There is a call within every one of us, a call to do something, however unpopular or unnoticed, to make the world a better place." Robert K. Cooper,

"Nothing is predestined: The obstacles of your past can become the gateways that lead to new beginnings." Ralph Blum

"How far you go in life depends on your being tender with the young, compassionate with the aged, sympathetic with the striving, and tolerant of the weak and strong. Because someday in your life you will have been all of these." George Washington Carver

"The man is richest whose pleasures are cheapest." Henry David Thoreau 

Christmas morning, Diary entry

Urm. Dear Diary.

... I don't have much to say.

I should be greatful, I got so many presents under the tree waiting to be opened. I just cant face the thought of going downstairs. I'm a mess.



It's Christmas morning, where all is suppose to be jolly and good. Suppose to be. I have no idea how to put this... School massacres, how do you deal with them? I'm fucking speechless, that's what I fucking well am. The more I think about it, the more the anger brews inside me. I'm like an overheated kettle. Jesus Christ.

I just need to write, and get my mind off of things. But the more I write the more bullshit I come out with, when I speak it doesn't even make sense. Why does it always happen to me? Why the fuck is it, that whenever I move to another school a tragedy has to follow me? This is by far the worst.

I should count my lucky stars that it wasn't me in that room, suffering in silence with nobody there to help. Why did I listen to William and not come in? I should of been there to stop him. I know, I fucking bloody know he wouldn't of killed me like he brutally murdered every single one of them innocent teenagers. He loved me.

My god, I'm loosing my fucking mind sitting here thinking about it. Who would of known that quiet William could've been the defendant of a school massacre. These things don't happen by a click of a finger? But what made him... Who made him... Why did it... So many questions but never enough answers.

Urm, dear diary.

... I dont have much to say other than: My friends are dead, William is in a mental institute, my parents are never going to be happy together, I have to move schools again and finally... Today... It's christmas morning, where all is suppose to be jolly and good. Suppose to be.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pv0hlbWpa1w
(The image of the Christmas tree was suited for this diary entry because I was talking about Christmas day and coming downstairs to receive a lot of presents from my rich father however not being grateful for them because I was too upset about the school massacre I luckily got away from)

Last night was so fun, Diary entry

Well Hello diary!

Do I sound happier than usual? That's because I am. Go on guess why. I dare you.

Last night, I slept with Nicholas. It was his first time, it was so cute he confessed to me today. I felt harsh because I laughed at him. But he was pretty good, in fact make that really good.

We were just talking and he said to me "I've been thinking about what you look like, you know... with no clothes on" At first I laughed and then said "What do you mean?" He pulled me in closer, kissed me on my forehead and whispered in my ear "I think, I know... What I'm trying to say is..."

I don't know what happened to me, my body just took over and I felt shivers. This, I think was love. It was fun, it was interesting, it was so good. Is it bad that I'm fairly new and sleeping around? Well, I've had opinions been said about me before, it's not like I'm going to miraculously give a fuck now.

Honestly, it was so fucking good. He wants to keep us a secret, are you for real? Is there something wrong with me? Opinions will be opinions I suppose. All I know is that last night was fucking amazing and it'll be so hilarious just to rub it into Williams face when it eventually comes out!

I suppose I'll have to lour Nicholas in even more now, just to make sure he keeps coming. He seems quite interested. Let the fun and games begin!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2o7rlLquqt4

(The image of Nicholas was best suited here because it was relevant to the diary entry and I was speaking about what happened 'last night' with him. I imagine Nicholas to be a good looking, just under 6ft boy with a slight edge to his personality, which makes my character more attracted to him.)

Friday, 20 September 2013

Getting to know Nicholas, In the common room, Diary entry

Hello Diary,

I know we haven't spoken in a while, I've been busy up to my eyes revising. It seems like for once I actually got the wrong impression of Manchester. It's not all that bad. I guess BBC News only show the bad aspects of Manchester. Well at least this part is quite upper class. They are snobby, but no way near as snobby as the people in Cambridge.

There is a boy called Nicholas, he seems lovely. Ok, i'll let you into a secret... I really fancy him. I think there's a bit of a love triangle, well actually there is. William asked me out, it was so funny. He made such a big fuss over it which I clearly wasn't interested. It was quite fun stringing him along though. I felt bad after he told me about his parents but you know... I'm interested in Nicholas.

Nicholas is so gorgeous, he has such a fit body. We keep catching eyes on opposite sides of the class room and then he does this fit smirk and flicks his hair. Hot or not? HOT.

(The image of Nicholas was suited here because I was explaining in my diary entry what he looked like and how I felt towards meeting him for the first time and being instantly attracted to him.)

 

Before the play, diary entry

Dear Diary,

I'm shitting myself. My dad's just told me that we're moving out of Cambridge and moving to Manchester (Stockport). I love how my dad is so rich, because he spoils me rotten and I get what I want. But not always. Because he is rich, this means I have to move around all the time just for him to stay rich.

I've just got use to Cambridge and the posh snobs there, and now I have to go to Manchester. What even is Stockport? I bet it's full of low life, drugged up children trying to be older than they really are. I've heard a lot about Manchester, you see it on the news and stuff. You know, the children in schools never learn, adults are out raving until all hours. I can't believe how stupid my dad is being, for once in his life could he not listen to how I feel?

I think it's sad. I've never really had a best friend. You know, somebody you can share secrets with and do fun things with. Well I did, years ago. When I was really young I went to a nursery in Harrow and my best friend was called Jessica, but I called her Jess. She was always moving around and then I never spoke to her since. Now the tables have changed and I'm always moving around. I think I'm immune to having a best friend now. Maybe it's something wrong with me?

My parents never care about my childhood, you know... Letting me grow up and be free. Its always me me me, I I I, daddy knows best. More like daddy knows where to put his money.

Anyway, I'm going to sleep on the idea of me moving to somewhere else. AGAIN! I may as well listen to some good music whilst I'm at it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0J2QdDbelmY